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A poem doesnt have to rhyme,
or make you cry.
it doesnt have to make sense,
to show you what it means.
it only has to mean something,
before you see it.
and this is what they should be like:
hence,once i saw you walking,
i had to stop and stare,
watch you walk on,
without watching me.
I had to sigh once you left,
but only when i saw,
you went on to that girl,
and turned away from me.
You passed on,
left me alone,
and now i dont care,
if thou arth thy friend or thy enemy.
- by Fayne Darkness |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/10/2008 |
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- Title: what a poem should be
- Artist: Fayne Darkness
- Description: ok maybe not but still felt like it enjoy
- Date: 12/10/2008
- Tags: poem should
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Comments (3 Comments)
- SamuelNorbury01 - 12/19/2008
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It's like an instruction manual, but then it's also a poem biggrin
I like it razz 4/5 - Report As Spam
- kryptic_valiance - 12/10/2008
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nice (?)
maybe if you just put the poem and remove the intro and put a little more effort in. - Report As Spam
- xProsperityx - 12/10/2008
- very....poetic. still very good. keep it up
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