You

• Artist: x-DopeSwaqqa
• Description: You brought happiness into my lonely heart You were not prepared what we were to start You saw my pain and sorrow You made me look forward to another tomorrow You made me laugh and you made my cry But most of all you made me feel alive When i close my eyes To sleep at night It's you i see Holding me tight. I know it is wrong To be dreaming of you But my heart just can't stop These feelings so true. A promise was made To determine my fate.
  And so for now In my heart will always be you.
• Date: 12/09/2008
• Tags: youwillalwaysinheart

heart I wrote this poem because me and my best friend Ayumi Koike have a similar problem about a guy that we like. Me and my best friend have a similar personality really. I wrote this poem because of this guy that i like, he wrote a letter saying the three important words I LOVE YOU...I didn't expect from him to say that words but he did even though i haven't met him personally yet. And my best friend Ayumi she's going back to japan. Our friendship my best friend will always never die no matter where we go, i will see you again my friend. heart
So please comments about this poem. And i'll be please for all of you who commented and for those whose commenting, so please enjoy it!!! heart

Comments

[Cookie_Booger]

It's confusing.
You should have done it in lines, since this is poetry & lyrics and not stories.
And is the description the poem? Confusing.
And could the title be less cliches? - . -

[banana1316]

sound great

[philelectricguitar]

Wow, this is... amazing! it sounds great!

[DarkShade300]

kool

[gold super_star]

its sweet..

[XxxBananasxxX]

i love it heart it made me cry crying
5 stars