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Two children playing
In the front lawn.
They sit with each other
And suppress a yawn.
Their dolls only sit there
Silently begging them to look,
But the children just wait there
Yearning for a book.
The dolls are sick of waiting.
They silently start to walk.
The children do not notice,
But stand there and talk.
Their dolls silently walk
Into the silent house
And silently surprise
A very small mouse.
They silently walk through a door
To grab a couple knives.
Then silently wonder
About their silent lives.
Looking at each other,
They silently fawn,
Over the beauty
Of their silent lawn.
They creep up behind
The two young girls
And stop under
Their golden curls.
They draw back their knives
And plunge them deep
The children screamed
And then were reaped.
The lesson was learned
For everyone in that house.
But the only other one
Was a very small mouse.
- by xXxVynn_Vampire_10_10xXx |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/09/2008 |
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- Title: Coup D'etat
- Artist: xXxVynn_Vampire_10_10xXx
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Description:
Moral of the story: Play with your dolls, or else.
wtf, Vynn, more poetry?
yes. more poetry.
xDD
yeah, I'm not sure if the title's very correct, but I was bored of homework so yeah. (I think I'll do a limerick next... yay!) - Date: 12/09/2008
- Tags: coup detat scary
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Brutal Destiny - 12/12/2008
- i'm sorry but this is very ameture writing man. there's no flow at all and the rhymes are too forced and vocab is week, try again.
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- hey girl hey XD - 12/11/2008
- crreeeeppyyy!!! i love it
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- Zaraxivus66 - 12/10/2008
- Well I give it creativity points, but its not exactly a touching piece. It doesn't seem to reach out and grab the reader, nor does it convey a sense of particular importance. Sorry but a low rating from me.
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- ifawkmonkeybutts - 12/09/2008
- omg i love it!!its like creepy but awesome!!! biggrin i love love love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!5/5
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- XxMidnights Vampirexx - 12/09/2008
- I LOVED IT IMOTO X3 I DONT PLAY WIT DOLLS THAT MEANS ILL SILENTLY REAP THE DOLLIES *TILTS HEAD TO ANGLE* U LOOK SHINY LIKE PLASTIC X3333
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