Nightmares

• Artist: Bostonian
• Description: one day i had a nightmare that truly scared me at the time. But then i realized that this amazin thing that i had thought up was ver intreging, so i embraced it. but soon the nightmare was over, and i wished i hadn't really woke up.
• Date: 12/08/2008
• Tags: nightmares dreams reality sunset seashells

When the moon showed blue,
And when my tears collided with the earth,
My fears tumbled from my heart,
Then chased me away from my dreams,

So I decide to follow my heart instead of run away,
And size up the horrid smiles of masked figures,
Memories poured out from my inner self,
And I came to realize that I need not be afraid,

The masks were lifted to show me the grueled creatures,
Who led me away to their mysterious lands,
Where vines curled from the earth into the sky,
And strawberry trees grew,

I ventured into their caves collecting sea shells,
And watched the red sun set making the glittering path apear across the Ocean,
Then I realized,
That I never wanted to leave my nightmares,

Comments

[dark_angel6587]

thats really good but i think it is a little hard to understand btw way to go with it being rough way 2 b an individual

[Bostonian]

yaaaas I knowws, I tis ssuuuuuppoooseed toooo be UN smooth. biggrin

[Gentil Amant_Plaisir]

Bwaah Hey thur.. Uhm, thinking: Maybe smooth it out a little/lot more so it has more of a beat to it. And poems don't need commas; they can have periods. ^^ (btw check your typos; there are a lot)