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I feel as though my life, is coming to an end...
I don't want anyone around, not even my friends...
I just want to leave, to run away from home...
This life is not mine, this life is unknown...
I'm saddened to tears, I'm wishing for death...
I started with nothing, and I have all of it left...
The only thing I want, the only thing I need...
Is to be with the person, who brings me to my knees...
She makes me happy, she turns me on...
She's the only one I wish for, she's the reason I'm not alone...
She is always by my side, and always in my heart...
Yet she lives so far away, and that's what's ripping me apart...
My Soul itself, has fallen on the floor...
It's crying out in pain, it's wanting something more...
It wants to be by her side, it wants her in my life...
My whole body feels the same, it wants her as my wife...
I want nothing more, than to have her by my side...
I can barely eat, barely breath, I can only run and hide...
I'm losing my grip, I'm slipping in school...
I don't give a Damn, whether I'm popular or cool...
I just want one thing, I want nothing more...
I'd give up everything, for the girl I adore...
In the future I know, we will be together one day...
But that day is so far off, it seems so far away...
I don't know if I can stop myself, from leaving this life behind...
I want so badly to run away, my whole body wants to, even my mind!
My heart wants me to, my brain knows I couldn't...
It's something I want to do, something I shouldn't...
But I don't give a s**t what I should or shouldn't do...
All I know, is what I want, and all I want is you...
Came up with all of this as I typed it, entirely off the top of my head...
So please rate and comment fairly, I don't think it's all that bad...
- Title: Whatever comes to mind
- Artist: Killvin
- Description: I don't know... I just felt like writing a poem... and so I did... and here it is... as I type, I have no ideas in my head, I didn't plan this out... I haven't even started typing up the poem... so this poem is just going to be about how I feel right now..
- Date: 12/06/2008
- Tags: whatever comes mind
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Hezzarther - 04/15/2009
- Aww.
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- DeCrazySheep - 04/07/2009
- It's not bad at all, I mean there are a few words I would flip, but not even considering it's off the top of your head.. well I'll simply say I liked it and leave it up to you to figure how to take it.
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- Foxy_Vampiress - 02/04/2009
- I was gonna ask you Killvin if Erika was far away. yeah that is hard. My second marriage I walked away from he got mean after I got Lyme disease. He was often on the road and away. I left Colorado and all I knew because the love was just not there anymore. I soncerly hope Erika cares for ya. Cuz unrequited love stinks.
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- charlene_XD - 01/15/2009
- wow that is a very good
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- Emperess_of_the_Night - 01/15/2009
- i want you to, there is nothing i want more then to be with you. i try, and beg and plead but my parents don't want to meet my need. my need to see you, to hold you tight. to never have to leave you alone, to show you things will be alright. if i could i woulfd pay my own way there. with what money i don't know, but i would pay my own plane fair. if i had to work illegally i would, sell my body anything, just to be with you. the day we get to meet seems so far off it is killing me too.
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- Killvin - 12/12/2008
- I have longer ones...
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- I Shinji Hirako I - 12/06/2008
- long one!
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