Fake

• Artist: akatsukigrlX
• Description: some people are just heartless. it makes me sick that some guys can disregard a girl's feelings enough to cheat on them, or to break up with them and then go on dating another girl 5 seconds later. im sure there are some guys out there who wouldn't do something like that...i guess i just haven't met any of them yet.
  this is about--you guessed it--breaking up. if only duct tape could really fix a broken heart.
• Date: 12/06/2008
• Tags: fake love breakup

Feaux smiles and empty kisses, wrapped in gold paper with red ribbons
That tie me up in knots in your arms and in the sheets on the bed where we lay
In the meadow with sun in our hair and spring on our lips,
And a secret in your heart that beats next to mine.
I waited, and you promised that you woud always come back
To break me apart and throw me on the floor
With the ribbons and sheets and the glass that shattered in the night
It seems love is not as strong as the duct tape that binds my bleeding heart
Or the velvety midnight that envelops my tears
If it was, then you'd still be here.

Comments

[Argent Tirer]

Interesting concept. But you also realized that women will go and do almost the same exact things?

The poem was good, nice choice of words. The ending seems a little off though.

[iBloodWolf42]

We all become broken, but some of us just say to ourselves: "I love you! I hate you! I can't get around you! I love you! I hate you! I can't live without you!"
10/5

[x_V-Ghost-V_x]

Don't you know that it some girls do the same thing...It's disgusting really, how many times someone can break you before you can't pull yourself together again...

[merkwurdig]

hmm, sad.
i'm loathe to call affection love, myself. it feels like love must be some deeper connection between two individuals. that's the love i know.
but i'm young, so i ponder only.

[HeartInHandNotInMouth]

ive seen too much stupidity and heart-break to be blinded love

[HeartInHandNotInMouth]

omg thats so true!!! like most of the guys ive met are totally bwitches who are to stuck up to notice someone elses feelings. but im glad to say i have a few guy friends that arent like that. i hope you find guys like that tho... i hope you find a guy smart and caring enough to do the right thing.evryone deserves a good life, it just depends on you to make it better. but they nvr notice that if they're life is good, your might not. and i hope the lucky guys realizes that b4 you let him go