My Love

• Artist: DarkWolfRawr
• Description: Wll, I'm not good at writing poetry so please be nice and forgive me. I was feeling pretty depressed and unloved when writting this...so yeah...only took like, five minutes to write up from my head, oh, and I'm not very well with rhyms...but not all poems HAVE to rhym, so don't jump at me because not all words rhym with one another, anyway, enjoy.
• Date: 12/06/2008
• Tags: love

My heart was turned to stone
By an untrue love
Cheated upon and left alone
As the devil slowly moved in from below

Then you came along
This time everything felt so right
Love felt as beautiful as a Bird's Song
My heart was turned pure and bright

Now the light seems to be going dull
Does love have to hurt so much?
I love you, and always have
One last kiss, one last touch...
No!Because are love is true and forever
Will always be bright
Even when its the darkest at night...

Comments

[Skipping_Evil_Zebra]

That's really sweet ^^ and deep. I think you're just fine at poetry. And the best writing comes quick and out of nowhere. If you have to think a lot about it, it's prolly not going to be good. :]

[lI_Ghost_lI]

Very deep, I can relate to what you wrote.

[Elza xxx13]

hey...u did preety good on this seriously...u should give it to yr 1 true love someday...

[Nikki4815]

Very nice. 4/5. Rate back? My best entry is called "Unspoken Message", and I recently added "Lost in the World"