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How do I write how I feel?...and put it perfectly on lines?
These emotions are real, i can't do without you being mine.
Your hugs make me weak, a talent you possess very well.
How can I even speak, caught under your spell?
From someone i'd had gone to trust, befriended in many ways.
Trust coasted by lust has darkened my days.
I've given my heart to your wicked soul, and fallen so helplessly under her control.
- by BabyDoll-Vixen- |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/06/2008 |
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- Title: Heart of a Tortured Temptress
- Artist: BabyDoll-Vixen-
- Description: I had to write this poem for class. It was to depict the feelings and thoughts you would say to your unloving lover. There is also a reply I will post it. Tell me what you think, honestly. I am no writer but i felt this was something i wanted to share. It was written a little over a year ago.
- Date: 12/06/2008
- Tags: heart tortured temptress
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Forever Exiled - 01/02/2010
- I thought that it had emotion behind it, and had a pretty good flow of words
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- BabyDoll-Vixen- - 12/09/2008
- no comments? I NEED FEEDBACK PEOPLE!
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- aredesu - 12/06/2008
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omg very deep
i like eet ^^
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