Invisible

• Artist: Kairi (KH-2)
• Description: I felt like ranting, and it came out in rhyme o___o;;
• Date: 12/05/2008
• Tags: invisible

I'm good at being invisible. I'm quiet. People almost don't notice I'm there.
They usually bump into me without notice. My voice almost always go unheard.
The last chosen. The last served.
Alone is usually the way I end up, but I'm not very lonely.
Unless I am with the people that see me as invisible.

I'm clearly visible.
But I'm clearly not so visible.
To the people I am invisible.
They can't even remember my name.
But you know people.

A piece that doesn't fit. Even with the pieces that don't fit.
A misfit, among misfits.
No place here. No Place there.
A misfit among misfits doesn't go anywhere.

Invisible. Misfit.
That must be it.
I'm an invisible misfit.

Comments

[Only Becca]

Not bad at all. It needs some work, sure, but I love the line "A misfit among misfits". Big-much love! 3/5 because it needs work, but great message. (Don't even say cliche, people. I might hit you.)

[Kairi (KH-2)]

I don't know if this poem is worth keeping posted....It's not one of my best, and I'm not a writer xP

I'll give it 24 hours I guess... =/