Break

• Artist: TonytheBloodPhoenix
• Description: It's hard to explain. I don't know if it'll help others to continue to push on in life, cause it is a depressing piece of mine, but even from this dark, I'll always find a light. Otherwise, I wouldn't be able to see that shadow of mine that I acknowledge.
• Date: 12/04/2008
• Tags: break depression escape hope path

I break from this mess
From these chains
But I can't break from what makes me depress
And then it breaks me

I'm filled with trouble
And there's too many pains
Suffocating under rubble
I'm broken, you see?

Grand philosophies
Begin to make my heart taint
Because there's too many atrocities
How could anyone have glee?

But I can't help but love
Everything I see, I won't faint
From the evil above
I know my creed

With all the bad
In this world, I notice good under the paint
Even when I'm sad
You can't make me break, as you've seen

Comments

[Rinxtam_XIII]

nice but there were somethings that were read that just didnt seem to fit. you have a very nice underlying rhyme structure though

[Princess Aqua Moon]

wow very artistic keep goin