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Im the one you count on,
your one and only son.
Im supposed to be there on command,
but for me you dont give a damn.
You say u love me,
but I know what i see.
You lie to my face,
and you won't isten to my case.
I hate your stories,
I hate your mournings.
I hate your voice,
I hate your noise.
But I stop and look above,
and im your love??
- by Ryan_A_Lycan |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/03/2008 |
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- Title: The loveless love
- Artist: Ryan_A_Lycan
- Description: Some stuff Im expirementing with.... comment me on what u think..
- Date: 12/03/2008
- Tags: loveless love
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Comments (5 Comments)
- ImmaMkay - 12/05/2008
- I loved it used to be rockstar!!!!! BRAVO!!!
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- iBrightScales - 12/04/2008
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There are several grammatical errors, and it's really not that great.
Revise, correct all errors, and then it might be better. - Report As Spam
- PunkBlackieAngel - 12/04/2008
- nice
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- Sexxii_Candy - 12/03/2008
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VERY NICE
IT MAKES ME THINK
I SHALL GIVE YOU 5 STARS OUT OF 5 - Report As Spam
- Chasing the Daylight - 12/03/2008
- Bravo, very interesting
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