- Once there was a little girl named alex and her friend called amy.Alex's mom left to go to the store for an hour and left the alex and amy home alone but before her mom left she locked all the windows , doors ,and the front door to.Then 10 minutes later a STRANGER came up to the door.Alex said:what was that?who is that?Omg it a boy i never seen before.who is he?Alex arnt you going to anwer the door? amy said.?Alex said no what if he has a gun or a knife and hes hideing it in his socks.Dont be crazy alex hes not wearing socks.Oh ok then.Alex anwsered the door and there was a teenager who look liked hes was nervous and he looked like hes was fourteen Alex said. is Your mother home the boy asked? Her name is Mrs.frager.Yes said alex.Can i speak to her?ummm i dont know, alex said.Ok ill wait .Hold on ok ill get her . Alex pretended to look for her mother.Alex what are you doing?I dont know what to do, he looks like hes about to kill us who is he?i dont know amy said.Well i talk him out of it ok. OK i suppose.(alex goes back to the door)I dont know where she is she must have gone outside or something can i tell her something you need to tell her like a message.Ummm no ill.....are you a frager to...NO amy said im a visitor. ok. then the boy runs down the block and disapears.Im glad thats over alex said no lets go back to my room ok.. ok.(1 hour later) why isnt my mom bakc from the store yet.I dont know amy said.While the two girls where in alex's room all of a sudden they heard a HUGE scream.they both ran down the stairs and into the backyard.OMG OMG NO who did this.Alex was bursting into tears....THERE HER MOM LIES DEAD ON THE GROUND
- by XxGummyEmoBearXx |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/03/2008 |
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- Title: A strange man...
- Artist: XxGummyEmoBearXx
- Description: This is a story about two girls named alex and amy, who stays home alone when her friends mom goes to the store.Then 10 minutes later a stranger rings the door bell.
- Date: 12/03/2008
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Lil Cutsie - 12/26/2008
- Great story but needs punctuation and quotes. wrong arena though
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- RasorBlades XxJamesxX - 12/26/2008
- I didn't like it at all its not a poem and its not a good story I hated it and it makes absolutly no secnce, it needs detail and serious punctuation. I absolutly hated it...Try again
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- NebuChi3 - 12/07/2008
- You didn't put quotes....It was hard for me to read so I stopped at the 5th sentence.
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- iBrightScales - 12/04/2008
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This is not a poem. You even state that in you description.
And even if this was a story, it would be a horrible one.
Wrong arenas, horrible story.
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