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Rain is pounding on her window,
While he is pounding on her mind.
Make it stop, she begs of him now,
This pain is of a brand new kind.
Screaming silently in her head,
Bleeding badly from the scars.
A battle raged, a girl broken.
Laying silently,
In agony,
On her bed.
She looks at the building,
Says she's thinking about jumping.
Says she's tired of life,
She must be tired about something.
Bleeding, broken, and battered.
Who would take her now?
She says it's all in her head,
She'll get along, somehow.
Trampled, torn, and trying.
Bleeding from the heart.
She says it out loud, now.
Screaming, no longer crying.
She beat the pain, the agony.
She's so different now,
Don't you see?
Leave her be.
- by Kyden Sarita |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/02/2008 |
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- Title: Pain
- Artist: Kyden Sarita
- Description: I was feeling sad, I had to get this off of my chest. It's a song I just wrote about depression. No, I'm not depresse, but this was just screaming at me to be written down. So, here it is. Rate fairly, please. I hope you enjoy!
- Date: 12/02/2008
- Tags: pain
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Comments (3 Comments)
- iBrightScales - 12/04/2008
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It's okay, but not great.
I enjoyed it to an extent, but this sort of poem is posted often so they all annoy me.
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- ashley22x - 12/03/2008
- Oh my gosh. This is amazing. And it's really cool that you wrote this while you weren't depressed. Imagine how epic your next poem will be when you are actually feeling what you write about. I'm looking foward to reading more. Keep it up.
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- XxxSexGoddess411xxX - 12/02/2008
- i love this way to o man! 5/5!
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