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your eyes are as blue as the sea
your arms rapped around me
a big frown upon my face
what is wrong?
when i frown it brings worrie to the world
what happened
did someone die
but no these solutions are wrong
then what is wrong
my heart is crushed
my hair is dry
i have tears in my eye
im gonna cry and guess what
BOOM!!
your eyes are now black
it is night when it attacks
BOOM!!!
this the last it attacks
your hair is gone
your face is purple
and yet your eyes are .........
GONE
it is cold
the earth is a cube
he fell off the edge now you did too
- by RaveGurl4life |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/01/2008 |
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- Title: life sucs
- Artist: RaveGurl4life
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- Date: 12/01/2008
- Tags: life sucs
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- sweet yukki - 04/13/2009
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awhh
im soo sry... - Report As Spam
- koolaidman55 - 12/04/2008
- aww la la who died
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- ~Shadey Sam~ - 12/04/2008
- I like the expressions and imagery. Depressing, deep but its what some people feel and some can't express and I think you expressed quite well. I'm sorry if you have had a recent loss.
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- dreamshiver - 12/02/2008
- That is very deep Loren and who died btw it be AsWSOm3 SAMM3rs
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- RaveGurl4life - 12/01/2008
- this is loren i felt depressed if you really pay attention you will see my point he died sad
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