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you are having dinner with your loved one.
a lobster in front of you and a champagne bottle to your left.
u clink glasses as u gaze in to each others eyes.
all is well...
until... an explosion of soud...
glass breaking...
people screaming.
you look up, your loved one is on the ground blood pouring from their neck.
their breathing comes in gasps.
you jump to there side.
they whisper "i...love...u", then they pass.
you cry.
you cry for anger...
for hate...
for your loved one... for yourself.
you hate...
god for taking your loved one...
the one who pulled the trigger.
then acceptance.
you accept gods choice...
you accept they're gone...
you accept that they're in a better place.
you hear sirens in fhe distance, then you shut their eyes
- by kingmufasa |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/29/2008 |
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- Title: loved one
- Artist: kingmufasa
- Description: its a poem i made because well i wanted too an i was going thriugh times but any way send a comment say wut u want to say an rate it
- Date: 11/29/2008
- Tags: loved
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Comments (6 Comments)
- The Grace Of Rain - 02/22/2009
- very nice ^_^ 5/5
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- Heartless_WolfSpirit - 12/29/2008
- o wow i realy like it even if it sounds like part of a story its still good i almost cried ^_^
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- Dremora Maiden - 11/30/2008
- hmmm...nice ^^
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- Rentyn - 11/29/2008
- I really like your poem!
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- El Clown 95 - 11/29/2008
- DUDE U WROTE A NICE POEM
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- BeaniesFTW - 11/29/2008
- it's pretty good, but more of a story than a poem.
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