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He's dying from the pain of heart,
the bullet to his head.
He's so eager for the dead,
to be so much more instead.
The crumpled pieces in his chest,
that used to be his heart,
Stay thumping on for one more breath,
He knew it from the start.
He pulled the trigger,
tightened his eyes,
he watched his life
pass before he died.
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She has the knife to her chest,
She's ready for the kill.
The blood reflects the almost left,
So depressed is how she feels.
Young Miss Juliet Jr.
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With oh so bitter sorrow,
plays her play part like the play,
and plays with sweet surrender.
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He ties the rope around his neck,
hangs it from the tree.
He stands atop the platform,
The puller of the lever
is not his enemy.
She takes her knife,
slashes the rope.
As it falls down in shreds
He was able to save his life,
All because he had friends.
- by applesauce262 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/28/2008 |
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- Title: Young Miss Juliet Jr.
- Artist: applesauce262
- Description: it means different things to different people,but like in my poem "The Forgotten" (Tag-alone) the secondary character or "emotion" had friends who noticed.
- Date: 11/28/2008
- Tags: friends zero alone
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Comments (6 Comments)
- nighthammer17 - 12/05/2008
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Haunting. It is testament to the notion that everyone is important, you may not save the world, but you can save your friends. We just have to pay attention.
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- Suicidal_Panda15 - 11/30/2008
- Amazingly well done. A bit akward at times but really well and different in a sense than most poems here.
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- applesauce262 - 11/30/2008
- to find any of my other poems just search my name zerorocker262 or tag "zero" to find them,plz vote and comment,if your profile is viewable and allows posts then i will personally thank you for reading,i hope you enjoy
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- ree-ree_bear - 11/29/2008
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Holy cruddy dude i love everything bout this poem no flaws no wrong doings awesome!
im cont on your other poems now 5/5 yo 3nodding - Report As Spam
- oxo_fox_oxo - 11/28/2008
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wow thats deep
its also really good
im adding it 2 my favorites - Report As Spam