LOST A LOVE

• Artist: ir_icat
• Description: my sister was really sad her bf had gone on a date with a other girl and he ended up liking her so he dumped my sister 2 go out with the girl he just gone on a date with (i had 2 stop her from killing her self)
  so i made this poem be-cuz i was really sad for my sister
  (every thing thats in this poem is true)
  plz comment and rate
• Date: 11/28/2008
• Tags: lost love

on her bed crying her eyes out
asking god that an other girl wouldnt take him from her
shes crying 2 god telling him about how much this one boy makes her so happy whan she is so sad
how he seems 2 light up her world
she tells god that she would take a bullit for this boy and how she would give up her life just so he can live
how she would never want 2 make him
sad,mad,hurt,unloved, or any thing like that
and how she trys so hard to fix all of the things that he ask her and any thing that he ask her to do she'll do any thing for him just 2 make him happy
she tells god that she would be lost with out him in her life
but that didnt seem 2 work all of her crying,hopeing,and prying 2 god
god lat him fall for an other girl and just lat him rip my sisters heart out
she trys 2 put an end 2 her life she said
if i cant have the one i loved with all my heart then y should i live just 2 see him with an other girl that wont and couldnt love him as much as i do
then she put a gun to her head and yelled out 2 me
TELL ME Y........Y SHOULD I PUT UP WITH THIS PAIN
i pull the gun away from her and hold her as she crys
be-cuz ur my sister and i love you thats y

Comments

[13-Chaotic-Serenity-13]

Really... i feel the pain when you wrote it.... i hope she's ok....you're very sweet to do that.

[ElectraShocked]

that was very sweet. i hope your sis is ok... guys are jerks.

[Byakufirefox]

aswome,sad though

[xxxxDrPepperxxxx]

ok nice very sweet

[xXlove_fadesXx]

Aaaw, that's very very nice. :]

[Featherpaw xp]

very nice of u smile

[terrifying penguin]

Touching!