Lies

• Artist: Renee Kana
• Description: This is a poem I wrote and memorized to present to the class one day. Twas required and I thought I'd share it with you.
• Date: 11/27/2008
• Tags: lies

Underneath the starry skies,
Roams a little group of lies.
Very anxious to grow big,
They scuttle past each tree and fig.

Some are cats, moving swift and fast.
Others are turtles, walking slowly past.
In the end many lies fly,
So promies me you'll never lie.

Comments

[Anikyna]

I like it, and that is no lie

[Farrelei]

It's kinda short...
You should elaborate on it. It feels like it starts and ends immediately. Where's the middle? It needs to be longer, at LEAST three stanzas long.