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In times of peace no one called,
in times of wrath is where I fall.
In the eyes of others I am hated,
but remembered by all.
I am war
- Title: War
- Artist: iiZetsuu
- Description: this is something I made a while back.
- Date: 11/26/2008
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Comments (3 Comments)
- The Masked and the Life - 11/27/2008
- really nice, but short. make it longer next time lol. check mine XD
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- tear goddess - 11/26/2008
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for your first, it's quite good! ^^
Unfortunatly, I can't really give you any constuctive critisism, I'm not exactly good enough to be handing out anything of the such. - Report As Spam
- iiZetsuu - 11/26/2008
- Well this is my first poem so let me know what you think ^^
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