Should I Leave...

• Artist: imJerel
• Description: i wrote because of the feeling i have of leaving a special place...
  my school, to me that's the most important place/venue/event/part of my life...
  i had such a hard time dealing with the fact that im leaving that decided to write abt it..
  hope all of you will like it...thank you..
• Date: 11/26/2008
• Tags: should leave jerel

Should I leave this place one day...
i'm hoping that all the memories i have will stay...
thinking of what i went through all the years...
laughing at every bumps and cheers...

Should I leave this place i call home...
knowing that this day would come and i have to face it alone...
tears started dripping and my throat started choking...
i cant bare the thought of leaving...

Should I leave this school tomorrow...
i shall leave the memories that i know...
hoping no one destroys them...
hoping that everyone remembers them...

I shouldn't leave this place that i love so dearly...
because this is where my dream started..
where my dream happened..
and where my dream ended...

Should I leave this life...
i shall leave with a smile...
knowing that i left my memories of old..
to make new ones that shall soon be foretold...

Comments

[Tala Defenrir]

very good and filled with emotion and thats always good only thing I would say is "laughing at every bumps and cheers..." <-- that line is a lil weird way of putting it. Its the fact that u have them plural and with "every" in front of them it sounds a lil off, but other than that its great.

[cutie pie sandy]

very nice!!!!!
i like it!!!!
should add more poems!!!

[monkeylov3r28]

i like it becuz every one has to leave at onepoint or te other and ish just really good 5/5 smile