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The night seems to sing,
as my phone loudly rings.
I sit by the door,
waiting to hear more.
That ringtone that's playing,
means theres no more delaying.
The time, it has finally come,
to show you what you've done.
You've given me something great,
better than our first date!
You've given me love,
one as pure as doves.
Everyday it seems to say,
Please, don't ever go away.
My heart cries,
on the inside.
At once, i was sad,
then, you made so glad.
And now, all i can do is see,
see what you've made of me.
What you made me feel,
things that i never thought were real.
What i felt was a love so true,
it hit me from out of the blue.
My life is now complete,
loneliness and hatred have become obsolete.
You are my one and true love,
whiter than a dove.
You seem to fly so high,
deep into the sky.
- by PhiIosophicaI |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/25/2008 |
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- Title: What You've Given Me
- Artist: PhiIosophicaI
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Description:
This is a poem i once made.
The original is on my profile.
Please comment. - Date: 11/25/2008
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Un-forgetable_Love63 - 11/28/2008
- I adore the 2nd paragraph the most!
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- SabreUntouch - 11/27/2008
- aww luis i love it. it's kinda like my poemi wrote for my friend who was in the hospital.
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- weldjhcqbelrjhcbe - 11/26/2008
- omg hey luis biggrin i love dis poem i havent talked to u in forever wanna hang out? btw i gave u 5/5 *claps* bravoo smile
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- nice_little_EmO - 11/26/2008
- i love it!!! ^-^
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- ScreamxBloodyxMurder - 11/26/2008
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wonderful I love it
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- ii-Sinful_Dreamer-ii - 11/26/2008
- ur poem reminds me of the feeling u get when u find ur soulmate and u feel whole...it is a feeling of hope for eternal love
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