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See ye the light of heaven,
harken to the voice of angels.
in the liight of glory all is calm.
death here is nevermore.
- by Loralai Aya |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/25/2008 |
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- Title: Eterni
- Artist: Loralai Aya
- Description: Just a thought.
- Date: 11/25/2008
- Tags: eterni
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Loralai Aya - 12/20/2008
- The double 'i' shows that you hoold light for a beat longer than you would. it was used over a thousand years ago for minstrals who red songs from tomes and old scrolls. As for it being only one stanza, the short verse holds alot of feeling. I never used this style before.
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- JustAPoisonApple - 11/28/2008
- Not horrible, but it definatly wasn't note worthy. Is there meant to be two 'i''s in light?
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- Michael Jackson Fan 4ever - 11/27/2008
- very interesting! i like the use of Old English!
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- MezzoMesiah - 11/27/2008
- soo...uhh wheres the good part? 1/5
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