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-woosh She lay under the oak tree as the wind
blows the leaves over head
-skip -hop -skip a lil rabbit hops by as she sits there...
still as possible...... breathing softly.... her dress flat on the
ground... her soft skin glowing in the sun...
the rabbit is now next to her, sniffing her. All of a sudden her
body goes into s spasm, a violent seizer. She shakes! and shakes!
and then loses contiousness. She opens her eyes.. the sun is setting
now... and the temperature is dropping... she opens her eyes. she
is then frightened to see a huge dog sitting by her. she sits up, in
an attempt to walk. She lets out a long yelp. The frightened dog runs
away.
She falls to the ground... she wimpers and weeps quietly.....
the weather is cold..... and snow begins to fall now.....
she was found the next day... they did an otpsy on her.......
her legs were broken..... and she was frozen solid........ under
the oak tree..... her soul is at peace..... as she had died under the oak tree.
- by iiLil_emo_PuppeTii |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/21/2008 |
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- Title: The oak tree
- Artist: iiLil_emo_PuppeTii
- Description: ....
- Date: 11/21/2008
- Tags: tree
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Comments (2 Comments)
- MyHeartsTaken - 12/09/2008
- me too lol!! good
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- Tranlovescookies - 11/22/2008
- wow. It's very moving. I could actually imagine the image.
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