the great world war conclusion

• Artist: Lifes Greatest Illusion
• Description: my hypothesis if we keep resolving problems with brute force....... comment please
• Date: 11/17/2008
• Tags: wars conclusion

the fighting has stopped,

our enemy's retreated,

though our troops say we have won i think that neither side succeeded.

our captiol is gone,

our cities barley can strive,

and the people both rich and poor struggle to survive,

the effect of this great war, no one can thrive.

the economy's seems to be erased,

by this war we've faced,

what we call earth has ended u doing nothing but laying a waste.

years later our population is dying,

our leaders are hiding the truth by replacing it with lying,

all the kids who've lost their mothers begin crying to god " what we call a regular life has become a second hell where those who are good and bad suffer. only death will set us free from this world of agony"

now i too lay dying on the cold ground,

i take on last look at the world and i say to myself " it seems even though the people suffer it has effected our leader in the least, this world might have been better if they had replaced fighting with peace." as i say this in my last breath i close my eyes and welcome death.

Comments

[discreetlyforgetting]

As you get older, you will realize how difficult some people are. Not just dificult, but unreasonable. Pair unreasonability with insanity and you get Kim Jong-il. It doesn't matter how many times other countries attempt to mediate with him, he STILL wants to blow everyone up. There are simply some situations where mediation is no longer a possible solution. It's sad, but true.

Maybe you don't know how evil some people are in this world, but I assure you, war is not the greatest evil.

[discreetlyforgetting]

1. Leaders always lie.
2. Iraq was worse before when Suddam Hussein was alive.
3. More people are dying in countries like Africa where mass genocide is taking place daily, without US help. Why care any less about that?
4. Unfortunately, no one's population is significantly decreasing. Unless you count pandas as people. Conversely, no one's population is increasing too rapidly, either.
5. The economy has been struggling for a looooong time. Ask any adult.

[tksunshine93]

I agree with you.War is no way to resolve problems.If only the leaders of the world would realize that and stop taking the easiest way out for them.They don't have to deal with the pain and loss their decisions cause, perhaps if they walked in our shoes for once then the fighting would stop.