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It was said she was dead
But to kill the alive is her strive.
She passes you by,
With eyes as blue as the sky.
It is hard to believe
That you were decieved.
With her quiet whispers, dressed in robes,
It is hard to guess the power she holds.
Pale skin that looks like snow
Challenges all that you know.
Wonderous silver hair reflects the moon light
As she pulls you deeper into night.
You wonder as she gives you a fanged grin,
'To kill me is your next sin.'
But before you can say anything at all,
Thrown deeper, were you, into the night of fall.
Your body was found at the break of dawn.
But that vampiric Beauty was long, long gone.
- by TheCourteJester |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/16/2008 |
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- Title: Beauty
- Artist: TheCourteJester
- Description: I wrote this poem based on the past of one of my vampire characters for my story, Bloody Juliet. The vampire it was based on use to be one of the best killers around, but after five hundred years she regained her human mind and left her life of killing to try and protect mortals.
- Date: 11/16/2008
- Tags: beauty vampire moon night silver
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Comments (2 Comments)
- XxMonsterous MeganxX - 06/01/2009
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wow this is pretty good (:
you should post your story up when your finished..
this is great.
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and i love vampires. lol. - Report As Spam
- Pyraticen - 11/19/2008
- "But to kill the alive is her strive" - I don't think "strive" can be used that way. Maybe try "But she strives to kill the alive"?
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