- her body glow's in night and at moring she shin's when i look at her even if me and her r far away we alwas be togther in ower heart"sand when me and her be togther me and her shine like a shooting star in the sky.that why i love her redface biggrin whee whee razz heart heart heart heart 4laugh 4laugh 4laugh
- Title: this girl
- Artist: REDJAYKID
- Description: this girl i just meet and i know me and her love each other for ever and i hope u like the poem.
- Date: 11/15/2008
- Tags: girl
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- Slinkenhofer - 07/15/2012
- ...are you eight? You sound like you're eight. And not in that good, "playful, childish voice" eight. More like the "naive, everything was spoon fed to me" eight. 1/5
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- roythepunisher - 11/19/2008
- work on ur grammar, etc.
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- smexy kat512 - 11/18/2008
- not bad
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