You Are My Flower

• Artist: ILOVEJB12322
• Description: this is a poem i just thought of off the top of my head so.... ENJOY!!!
• Date: 11/14/2008
• Tags: flower rose sunflower dafidill

You are my rose the most pretty of them all but get on your bad side and your thorns will p***k my skin making me want to come back for revenge.
You are my sun flower the one that sticks out because no one really knows what your heart is all about
You are my flower even though i don't know them all, I do know that if your petals were to fly away from me i would surley fall.

Comments

[sqtshadow9776]

its gud can u rate mine

[Messy muzic]

it pretty good

[Scarlet_Teardrops]

Even though it's a poem you still have to use proper punctuation in your piece.
It seems very mashed together and messy, but if you cleaned it up a bit it would be much better.

Thank you for sharing.