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What do I have to do
to make you understand?
What do I have to do
to finally make you see?
How can you not believe
how important you are to me?
I don't know why you push me away
When I can see in your eyes you want to stay
What do I have to do
to finally stem your tears?
What do I have to do
to give you the smile you lack?
How can you not understand,
It's like your stabbing me in the back.
I don't know why you run away from me
What will it take for you to hear my plea?
What do I have to do
to make you understand?
What do I have to do
to finally make you see?
How can you not believe
without you, there's no point to me.
- Title: Misunderstandings
- Artist: Lyra_655
- Description: I wrote this poem awhile ago when I was upset with my friend.
- Date: 11/13/2008
- Tags: misunderstandings betrayal confusion tears scared
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Ms Make Me Smile - 11/19/2008
- good poem
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- Insane Jester646 - 11/17/2008
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good poem
i like how you structure it
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- naruto-chan i love you - 11/15/2008
- goo good poem
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- arbiter_liderz - 11/15/2008
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cool!!
criticize yaaaay: the "tears" and "lack" kinda don't go well together
hahaha
awesome work though
yaaaay 20 gold for commenting (I hope)
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