Fallen Hope

• Artist: haunted milkshake
• Description:
• Date: 11/11/2008
• Tags: fallen hope

when nothing is left and my heart feels so full that it pours
and my soul is being torn apart by life
I can't find the reason you stay
part of me like air
now only half is left
I'm so lost and I feel so cold
there is nothing here for me
there is nothing left of me
all that's left is my tears
I feel that I can't be free
but that's okay with me
who am I to say that you need me?
I'm so lost in this big world
who am I to say that you care?
I can't find anything at all
and I'm just so tired that I think I might fall
but who am I to say that you'll need me?
I don't see any reason at all
I feel that I am about to fall,off this big bouncing ball
I don't know anything at all
who am I to say you need me?
I'm just too scared that you might fall
just too scared if it all
I'm just so scared of it all
but I won't let you fall

Comments

[richard pants]

AWESOME!

[Ryusei Kurogane]

Nice...is this a song? I like what you wrote here, its very good. ^^

[mello fox]

That was very well written and amazing... I liked it!

[clumsy-story of my life]

that is good could you check out mine to c wat you think somethime?

[SPOOKYLOOT]

Very well written.. keep it up!

[kaggs]

wow this was beautiful ^_^
could you check out mine?
it's called what to do ^_^

[F1TTKUK3N]

omg, you're good >.> (: got inspired of something?
please vote my poem if you've got time ^.^