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Sitting here, thinking of suicide
While at my razor is placed at my bed side.
In my mind, my life shall ends like the tide.
The scars on my wrists are now pink and wide.
Some were too deep.
As they keep away this awful pain.
Even though it all comes back the same.
Looking at the way I live my life.. it all looks so lame.
The blood,
Pour out bright and red.
This will teach me not to cut on my bed.
My eyes close tight.
As i do it one more time
This life is mine, let me know when to stop my own time.
To mend these broken wrist.
Is like being awoken from a never ending nightmare.
Sitting here, thinking of suicide
While my razor is buried inside my mind.
As my life ends like the finial tide
The scars on my life, are placed down at my sides.
All were small and very deep,
To me, they help keep the pain away.
Still coming back.. just the same.
My life.. so meaningless and plane
The colored blood,
Pours out on to the floor
This will teach me not to cut were my carpet is worn
My veins open wide,
As I do it just one more time
This life is mine, let me know when to stop my own time.
To mend my broken heart,
Will only be to rip it apart
- by hardcore-lacey |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/11/2008 |
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- Title: SUICIDE
- Artist: hardcore-lacey
- Description: .. why dont you just take a guess
- Date: 11/11/2008
- Tags: suicide
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Zero_12590 - 07/20/2009
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Rate: *****
OMG Stuning...!!! Amazing...!!!
The best poetry is from the heart and you did that. Great work!!! - Report As Spam
- Twisted____Torture - 11/16/2008
- Very well done, i tip my hat to the poem. It is something you wrote from your heart and therefor no one can say if the message is right or wrong because it is what you feel. I agree that there are some rhythm issues but not major ones, also some spelling errors but they don't really matter, All in all i believe it is very well written. I give it a 5. :]
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- _P.-D.-A._ - 11/13/2008
- It is tragically beautiful. I like it.
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- xKittyxKittyx - 11/12/2008
- I'm not sure how to comment on this.The poem itself is amazingly written in my opinion.The rhythm is a little mared in some places.I just don't agree with the message.Suicide isn't the way out.
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