Winter Wonderland

• Artist: Milkbeary
• Description: This is a poem I wrote in my language class. I really like it, so I wanted to share! ^_^
• Date: 11/05/2008
• Tags: winter wonderland snow pine cold

Gentle snowflakes
Decorating trees
Puffs of smoke
Leaving chimneys

Howls of wind
Rattling the shutters
"It's a cold one tonight"
My father mutters.

Prickly pine cones
Clenched in my fists
The sweet scent of pine
Surrounds me in mists.

Cold winter snow
Freezes my cheek
I stick out my tongue
Oh, the air is so sweet!

This snow globe I hold
Is so lovely and grand
How I wish to live
In that Winter Wonderland!

Comments

[Milkbeary]

Thanks for all of your opinions! ^_^ I'm really glad you all like it. :3

[Chyanna200]

nice job that is really touching

[Japanese Kat]

o yea..... 5 STARS!!!!! forgot 2 say tat in my last comment, sweatdrop oh well, the more comments the better right? lol XD

[Japanese Kat]

it waz a beautyful poem, and i hope u enjoy mine
(im gunna post them on my profile wen i get the chance!) and yea, i cant beleive u did tat in ela! great job!!!! biggrin

[St Mario]

really sweet poem
it really made you almost feel that winter inside you
thanks for sharing it with us

[Pyromaniac-Rebel]

I really liked it too! It made me smile. I've a great appreciation for winter after living in Florida for 4 years. Winter is really an awesome season and this poem says that. I liked the little twist at the end. It all rhymed very well, too.