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The rain falls quikly
Running away from the sun
The birds sing softly
Everything is soaking wet
This is a wonderful place
- by xI-iPanda-Ix |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/03/2008 |
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- Title: Rainforests
- Artist: xI-iPanda-Ix
- Description: I wrote this poem for a seventh grade project.Hope you like it!!!!Please comment!!!!Nicely!!!!!
- Date: 11/03/2008
- Tags: rainforests
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Elenwyd - 11/07/2008
- spelt quickley wrong, but i like it
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- Lionhearted Sam - 11/04/2008
- A nice Haiku, though there is a few typos here and there. One or two syllables are off for a 5 per line Haiku, though most times they are in 6 syllable format. And the only other issue I had with your lovely poem was the lacking description of the unique trees there. Other wise, a great poem. Come read my poems, I have added a forest poem just today.
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