lost...

• Artist: slug1111
• Description: somthing i wrote in a sudden burst of apathy...
  hope u like it...
• Date: 11/03/2008
• Tags: sadgostlost

how can i fly
with broken wings?
or soar with stitches
on my heart?

limp on the ground
my hand outstretched
will you grab it?
or leave me to bleed?

broken spirit
whithout a crutch
will you lend me yours?
or laugh as i tumble?

i am not weak
nether am i strong
with no more tears
i am utterly hallow

and empty shell
a goast of a soul
will you help it?
will you even try?

an empty shell
a gost of a soul
will you help it?
will you even try?



...can i be helped?

Comments

[I_iz_Kittiekat]

wow it's so deep and i absolutly love it!

[Psychotic Bat]

i like it it's very good 5 out of 5

[MandaPanda15]

i like it, very deep

[verisia213]

i like the poem, but (just out of personal opion) i don't like the questions in the poem. i don't really like any kind of poem, with any kind of question....still, it's a damn good poem..so....5/5 for u!!! smile rate back?? username is verisia213.