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While swimming in the sea
I slowly start to slip
Down into the deep watery depths
of my death
I cannot stop my descent
I slowly start to choke
My mind is in a jumble
I can't even think
My lungs feel as if they are about to burst
The need for oxygen is growing
Bright lights flash before my eyes
I am afraid
I slowly start to lose concienceness
When i wake up
I'm in a magical place
So beautiful that I can't put it into words
I find that I am in heaven
I've always wanted to go to heaven
It's just the dying part that I fear...
- by clumsy-story of my life |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/03/2008 |
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- Title: fear
- Artist: clumsy-story of my life
- Description: This is my 1st submission in the arenas but i really want to know what you think cuz my friends think its pretty good so let me hear you voice!!
- Date: 11/03/2008
- Tags: fear
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Lilac_Luna445 - 11/17/2008
- Amazing work. I loved it. It describes me in a few ways. Great job. Keep it up.
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- musicloverx26 - 11/03/2008
- WOW WOW WOW loved it my gosh you are good!! =]
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