Remissing Bonds

• Artist: Mecca Against Reality
• Description:
  Comment/Rate fairly.
  Thank you.
  --Mecca
  
• Date: 11/02/2008
• Tags: remissing bonds

The trickles of time
Slowly fade with much anticipation
I am my worst critic
Faced with temptation
Because happiness is partisan
In this judgemental world
The few stable emotions
Have yet to unfurl

Wishing upon a wish
That the stars would fall
And this oceanic abyss
Would take over and recall

In the bliss we once lived
How chafed we remained
Imprinted into the snow
Our outlet retained

The tears tried to roll
But this time I stayed strong
Glued my eyes shut
New sense of right and wrong

Not fully there yet
I'm still looking for ways
Maybe, just maybe, someday
I will conquer this phase

With rare days outlasting
We all start to glow
Few days, the passing
Burrowed in sorrow
Hanging from the cleft
I wished to be held again
Save me from myself
For that will be the end

Comments

[the_ashen_child]

>< love it, you have really good flow

[This Accident]

This is deep. I only wish that I had this talent. God. Now I feel slightly stupid, but in a good way, because this is amazing. Possibly one of my favorite of your peices.

[gokushin540]

good good lilmore short next time.

[the loner that died]

that's really good

[lCrazyReturnsl]

dam i love this poems

[XxDarling_Rosey_PoseyxX]

this is too looooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooong.I fell asleap trieng to read it.but very inspiring.

[iBrightScales]

*is in awe*
My poems are horrible compared to yours.
Simply astounding.