Shadows in the night

• Artist: 2323_sutneV
• Description: a poem i came up during my P.E class please enjoy
• Date: 10/31/2008
• Tags: shadows night

shadows, peering at me from the corner of my lair. surely in the next life my shadow shall be there standing before me like a statue in promenace. ravens fear them, we live with them. cold images in the light yet stronger at night. it fills most with fear at the sight, while other feel right with them. but, in the night the fill all with fright. for they are shadows in the night.

THE END smile

Comments

[2323_sutneV]

thx i know it doesn't rhyme because i was being emo when it came to me so ya. lol

[DemeaningMeaning]

totally agree with the other guy, but if u can come up with this in P.E u should try to write recreationally.

[ChronicOvadose]

Honestly, I didn't really like it much. The rhyming was a little bad as you used the same words over and over again at some points. Work on it some more smile
Thanks for sharing.