Please~

• Artist: Scruffy_dog02
• Description: This is a short poem for myself and all others that feel alone. I hope you will acknowledge this poem and take time to think about it. Please take comfort in knowing a stranger cares about you all, no matter the situation you may be in. It will get better. Have a nice day~
• Date: 10/30/2008
• Tags: please

These suicidal tendencies,
Get in the way of life.

Emotional emergencies,
Please don't take the knife.

Please don't end your life.

Comments

[Scruffy_dog02]

well, i kinda meant to do that. . . i'm not stupid ><;;; i just wanted to effect people 'emotionally' (if i ever had a chance of doing so) i didn't so much wanted people to critique the poetry. . . yeesh

[Summer Fallwinterspring]

You rhymed "life" with "life."

Nice going.