He died in my arms

• Artist: Victor van Baron
• Description: I'll never forget the boy who died
  that night, right there, in that farm
  no fear no dread, no emotions he'd hide
  he welcomed death with open arms
• Date: 10/29/2008
• Tags: died arms

I watched him die in my arms,
Watched him falter, watched him paled.
I felt him die in my arms,
Felt his heart stop, last breath inhaled,
I let him die in my arms,
I thought I failed, though i never bailed.
There he laid, right in the farm,
My tears on his face, my mother wailed.
I loved him, held him in my arms,
My friend, my brother, laid impaled.
Rare beasts, he'd seen in swarms,
The seven seas, The world he sailed.
"Those poachers won't do any more harm."
I said, my tears like trains derailed.
He met death in open arms,
Life he had embraced, Death he hailed.

Comments

[XDreamGirl13X]

im so sorry for your loss

[allisun1]

thats sooooo sad sad

[Lex2442]

it needs some work, it is to stable you need to make it like a ryme...sorta like.....
The days are cold.
The night is silent.
And so i was told.
It is somewhat violent.

good job keep trying.

[dvskmaiden]

absoulutly brill i love lots of emotion getting filled up