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Have you noticed that I can't eat,
Have you noticed I don't sleep?
Have you noticed I'm twisted and cruel,
Have you noticed the things that I do?
Have you noticed that my heart aches,
Have you noticed I wince in pain?
Have you ever noticed me,
Or the blood I used to bleed?
Have you ever noticed the torture you put me through,
Or that I always dream of you?
'Cause I've noticed you,
my whole life.
So i say "I love you"
Then I die...
- by DiexToxSurvive |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 10/22/2008 |
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- Title: Have you noticed?
- Artist: DiexToxSurvive
- Description: umm a poem i wrote when i was alone in a library...plz comment
- Date: 10/22/2008
- Tags: have noticed
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Comments (7 Comments)
- babygurl2795 - 11/17/2008
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Hahaa! nice poem! i like the words u use... > wink oh and u r soo a better poet than me risu. ^.^ 5/5
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- AH-Closed - 10/29/2008
- Its really good and from the heart. You said you are over the depression so I am gonna say don't give up the hope you have found smile
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- kitkatkitty11 - 10/26/2008
- Hi Kinezumi! I agree ts great! 5/5!
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- Toxic_Pinup_ - 10/22/2008
- i like it, it really shows how you can feel after you tell someone u luv them and they dont respond or reject you i think... 5/5
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- Hellena Doll - 10/22/2008
- I feel that way all the time, This poem really relates to me and I like it alot. Nice job.
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- Krull233 - 10/22/2008
- wow that is really good biggrin
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