Dreaming of You

• Artist: onceuponatiger
• Description: Plzzzzzzzzzz Comment. i wrote this wen i was really sad. its about my friend. She actually plays Gaia so i hope she will read this.
• Date: 10/22/2008
• Tags: dreaming crying

I'm crying,
So softly;
I'm dreaming,
So true.
Will you please forgive me;
What else can I do?
I just can't stop thinking;
I know I've done wrong.
That's the reason I'm sitting,
And singing this song.
I'm crying,
So softly;
I'm dreaming,
So true.
I said I was sorry
I ever hurt you.
I know it takes a while,
To build back up your heart;
But I feel appalled
That I tore it apart.
I'm crying,
So softly;
I'm dreaming,
So true.
I swear I will never,
Do what I did to you.
Please, please forgive me,
For what I have done;
I know I must leave now,
For I'm not number one.
I'm crying,
So softly;
I'm dreaming,
So true.
My dreams have done nothing,
To bring me back you.
I'm crying,
So softly;
I'm dreaming...
Of you.

Comments

[Elemarr]

AMAZING!! I think some of the best poetry/songs are written when really sad or really happy.

[Natalia_Simo]

so cute

[spellgirl219]

aw its so cutie and sad

[CrowleysGirl]

this is AHMAZING!!! its so beautiful!!!!

[andwele]

i really like this. tenderly lyrical. i could hear someone softly singing this to him or herself, heartbroken, regretful. very nice.

[jade_empriss]

i like it alot it flows well ^_^

[MzSupaFli]

Aww This Was Precious... This needs to be made n a real song.. great