I sang into the darkness

• Artist: The Unfinished Story
• Description: Something I wrote,when I felt the urge to...
• Date: 10/22/2008
• Tags: sang into darkness

I remember,
The times I used to wait for you
I recall,
The treasured moments,so fast they slipped away.
But then you Kept me waiting for so long...
And in my moments of loneliness....

I sang into the darkness-
Hoping that you would hear my call.
Wishing you'd reply...
And stop my thoughts from giving me sleepless nights.....

I remember,
The time you first looked into my eyes.
I saw desire,
I felt love,and it was no surprise.
But then we went our own separate ways...
All I had left was memories of when-

I sang into the darkness,
Hoping that you would hear my call.
Wishing you'd reply...
And stop my thoughts from giving me sleepless nights....

Comments

[Nyxs_Ace]

that is a great poem. i cant think of any thing to critisize... 5/5 but if i could ied give u a 6/5

[iNDiANxFlAVoR-MoRxtASTiER]

i love this i can feel the pain and hurt in this one and can visualize in mind to a time where that has happened to me so this is really great....i do poetry as well but its nothing compared to this