Where did my life go

• Artist: Twilight Obsessed Fan
• Description: I have know idea what I will type I will do it free hand hope you like it please detail your comments so I know what is good and where I can do better check out my stories and my other poems please I need so help in my writing.
• Date: 10/17/2008
• Tags: where life love soul gone

Sitting alone thinking
About all that used to be
Smiling at some memories
While crying at others

When I look for something
I find it but i still feel lost
Like something is missing from my life
Something has life me

I want to know what is is
And then search for it
I will live on forever in wondering
If it was something in plan sight

Like a long lost friend
Or my soul floating in the wind
The farther it goes the more confused all become
Til i know where my life will pick up again and live on

Comments

[Samantha_Star101]

i agree with you nintai. very unique very soulful but very full of thought and feelings. very deep. ill give u 5 stars. ^^

[HeartInHandNotInMouth]

whoa that was deep, and wat i said sounded cheesy, but it was treu. i really like thins poem. its different from others because its actually someone thinking, instead of feeling. but you can still see the feeling. its like the thoughts battle with the emotions. like ur logic battling with ur heart. u dont know which side to take. very unique. and i luvvvzzz twilight 2!!!