Four Brothers

• Artist: Izumi-san
• Description: This poem is actually about my main group of friends in high school. I wrote this freshman year of college in class one day when I felt sad because I missed them so much. I'm not sure why I made everyone a guy, because there were actually two girls in this group...but the poem felt right with each person being a brother.
  
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• Date: 10/17/2008
• Tags: four brothers

My three brothers and I
create flesh in our dance.
I am the sand
I am soft like powder
yet strong and resilient.
My brother is the water
that holds my sand together
forming a body.
My brother is the fire
that hardens us
letting none enter in.
My brother is the wind
that cools us off
making us safe to touch.
My three brothers and I
are ourself and whole.

Comments

[Lex2442]

its great, but me being a writer too, i think its not good enough to win anything, 3/5

[ApolloxKnight]

Very nice, short and simple kudos