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Before my eyes my love was slain
Never before had I felt such pain
As his blood slowly painted the floor
I knew I'd cry forever more
Never again will I feel his touch
Never again will I love so much
A lifietime of misery
A lifetime of tears
Nothing but sorrow to sever the years
The space where so brightly
My heart had once shone
Is now filled with the pain
Of being alone...
- by Nanica Ishtar |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 10/15/2008 |
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- Title: Tribute: In Loving Memory
- Artist: Nanica Ishtar
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- Date: 10/15/2008
- Tags: tribute loving memory
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Nanica Ishtar - 11/18/2008
- Yeah...sorry about the kinda bad description...I just have no idea how to word it so that it sounds as good here as it did in my head when I wrote the poem...
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- Master Malik Ishtar - 10/19/2008
- As your husband I have to ask...if you were going to write a love poem...why didn't you write about US???? I love you Nanica!!!!
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- Aika Kida - 10/16/2008
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This is really good...and sad...
I just love how you made the ends of the sentences rhyme! - Report As Spam
- Master Scotty jr - 10/15/2008
- great poem
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- Nanica Ishtar - 10/15/2008
- He was her lover...
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- Supernovai - 10/15/2008
- love the poem, very nice =) but i agree.. i think the description killed it for me too. they way you wrote the poem makes it sound like he was her lover.
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- Celsaeus - 10/15/2008
- the poem is great. nees a better rythem, but its good. However, it killed the mood for me in the description.
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