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As all the angels gather around,
I sit up and stare
and I see them frown.
And their eyes glisten with tears...
They suddenly howl
and lift up their spears.
My soul is bleeding through its cracks
and inside I know
they will all turn their backs.
They jolt back to heaven and cry.
"Not ready!" they say.
"Not ready to die..."
Awake yet sleeping,I return the call.
"Take everything!"I scream.
"Take my damned soul!"
They seem to have faded,
they hide in the sky.
"Ready?"they say. (I can hear them.)
"You're not ready to die..."
- Title: The angels gather
- Artist: Hyalma
- Description: This one is my favourite and I hope you'll like it.It's not much but it's one of my best.I'd appreciate it if you commented, just to know what you think of it.
- Date: 10/13/2008
- Tags: angel gather death despair
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Comments (4 Comments)
- BumbleBeeSex_ - 10/16/2008
- nicee 5 of 5
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- mexicantacos2003 - 10/16/2008
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i got lost in translation
in other words i dont know very well how to interpret your poem so that i understand it at its fullest.
good poem
but my brain just doesnt seem to want to work today.
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- Kenmu - 10/16/2008
- this is a really good peom.
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- dratina92 - 10/14/2008
- great poem 5/5
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