Trees

• Artist: Tapeworm Sex
• Description: I wrote this poem because its that time of year when the leaves fall and all the color is around us.I hope you enjoy it.
• Date: 10/13/2008
• Tags: trees

Trees
The wind blows
My leaves fall
I am going but not for long
When I wake
My leaves will shake
But will not fall to the ground.

Comments

[baby-bosley]

dude its really really good but one suggestion is that you say "when i awake" ya so really good 5/5

[Alice No Shirayuki]

I Envy you Peter!!!!!!!!! that is something I can't do! Have fun with it!