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His life was ending
as it would seem
and now he lays bloodied
and his mind with his dream.
He had done what others would not
to sacrifice his life and everything he had.
To that one girl he truly loved
because she gave him no reason to be sad.
And as he breathed his last breath
in his heart ease came
for hek nows for sure
that she will have a bright future.
- by NeerDeathnote |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 10/13/2008 |
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- Title: Sacrifice for love
- Artist: NeerDeathnote
- Description: a simple poem about a guy who sacrificed both body and soul for a girl he loved...
- Date: 10/13/2008
- Tags: last kiss will give
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Jeyrin - 12/21/2008
- I like it! 5/5.
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- _PiStAcHiO sOuP_ - 10/13/2008
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nice ^^ - Report As Spam
- pokefan213 - 10/13/2008
- typo
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- luv-me-for-who-Iam141 - 10/13/2008
- its good but be careful with with your rythem schemes but it is still pretty good 3/5
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- blind-hawks-master - 10/13/2008
- your ryhmeing scheme screws up a little bit in the middle stanza still good 3/5
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- ti[A]n - 10/13/2008
- so saddd ><
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- Serex_Keylyx - 10/13/2008
- that poem is kindda sad...
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