Confessions of a TeenageMother

• Artist: vicki1992
• Description: I wrote this when I was going threw a hard time. I tried to write down my fealings but I got this. Hope you like it.
• Date: 10/11/2008
• Tags: confessions teenage mother

If Death is heaven
Then Earth must be hell

First you left me for another
Then her for me
I was confused and sad
But at the same time happy

Happy that you came back for me
Then you left the land entirely
And took my heart and soul with you
To the place they call death's gate
Though you did leave me with him
Oh he looks just like you

Every time I look at him I weep
I weep for me
I weep for you
I weep for the us that was never meant to be
And I weep for him who will never see his father
Until he too reaches death's gate

And this I pray will never happen to another
For this is the Confessions of a Teenage Mother.

Comments

[Chaotic_Theoretician]

Wow...this paints quiet the picture and gets the message across...

Question, if I can ask: are you a teenage mother? You don't have to answer.

[katiekrunkorola]

poertry isn't about rhyming, atramentous snow

that was a great poem!

[SingingKalona]

Poetry doesn't have to rhyme, nor rhyme perfectly. Good use of tone.

[just Atra]

The rhyming scheme is off.