Dragon boy

• Artist: a_broken_soul_4_life
• Description: well i love dragons and i am fild with fantasy all the time it is tecknicaly my life.......litraly.......well injoy my poem and i hope you like it ladys and gentlmen my new poem Dragon boy.
  o did i mention that it is about someone i love XD
• Date: 10/11/2008
• Tags: dragon

Dragon boy are you here
Will you always fight my fear
Dragon boy will you be there
And show me that you always care
Dragon boy i must go
For it is now that i shall have a foe
I only need you to stay
And make shore that every day
You will wait
And never let your self be bait
I love you more every day
And that is why you mush stay
If you were to hear that i had died
Understand that it is a lie
For i can never die
As long as you are in my life
The time is near
Just 2 more years
I want you to know that I care
That i could never ever bare
To lose you would be like losing my heart
You have a part just not this fare
Wish me luck and always know
That as long as the wind shall blow
I will never let you go
No matter how hie or low
Dragon boy you are my love
And if you ever see a dove
Think of me and only me
For it is then that i shall be
I love you Dragon boy
And always know you'll always be a joy

Comments

[Jenny954-]

Well I for one like it 10/10

[La Promenade Morte]

some spelling errors, but that's not the point. this is cute. 4/5

[frozen_still]

Punctuation in poems isn't really used that often if you have ever read more then one type of poetry. At least this is something I have noticed usually for effect.

[pheonix20222]

Yay! Its GD again! I love your soul... It brings good tidings, along with your poems biggrin . Go YOU!

[Depressed_Teddy_Bear]

girl i love this u rock girl y didnt u tell me

[Atheistic Acorn]

It's okay, but two words of advice: capitalization and punctuation.

[Ashley_and_3vil_forever]

i lie it kinda