Dark broken heart

• Artist: Aoi-Tsukiko Tsukehara
• Description: my heart is dark it is broken let me share with you what dark means to me
• Date: 10/10/2008
• Tags: dark

Here I sit
in the dark
people can notice me
just sitting here
no one knows me
nobody talks to me
I am a hole in the wall
empty, dark
nobody minds me
they just pass by
i loock around
but no one looks back
i see people
but no one sees me
my heart is as black as night
and as cold as ice
my hopes and dreams ran away from me
people stole my integrity
my determination, my independence
i sit in this damp corner
all alone
thinking, wishing, hoping something good will come along
I stare up at the raining sky
my tearstained face is red and hot
but i am cold and wet
i am not poor nor rich
i am not beautiful nor ugly
i am not black nor white
i am not nice or mean
i am broken
broken into a million shattered clear pieces of glass
but no one is here to pick up the empty pieces
the dark is my only companion in this journey
me and dark get along quite well
we know each other
we understand each other
we can talk to each other without words
our hearts are as one
though we are two
the sun does not shine
but the moon does glow
i cry, i bleed
the red poors down my face
down my chest
red
what a unique color
the dark velvety color of it makes me feel
i dont know what it makes me feel
i just feel
not a something
what i feel is not a something
it is not a nothing either
it is just a feel
not a feeling
a feel
i guess
this is where i live
this is who i am
i am just a dark broken heart

Comments

[Kaymay08]

i like it. btw Syera poems dont always need to have a rythm

[Aoi-Tsukiko Tsukehara]

I was not going for poetry.I am not a poet.In fact, i hate poetry.

I was just explaining.Poems and my writing are different.poems are simply saying things metaphorically.i say things straight out.

[Yanueh]

I can see you tried to use "poetic" words. However, they neither flow together nor form any kind of poetic rhythm.